Advice on creating a good Adultwork profile

[SirennaB]

Do you have a link to your profile?

I think the pics r the most important - if your profile is the same as ur pic on here i think youv got that covered, they look professional and tasteful

I find tabs better than one big long piece of writing - easier for men to stay engaged

Apart from that i cant really add much but didnt want to not comment..
Oh keep editing ur profile to keep u up the pages and on tbeir hotlists x

Hello Jessica!  Firstly thanks for taking the time to reply and your advice I really do appreciate it! So thanks my adultwork profile link is
 https://www.adultwork.com/MistressSirenna 

As you can see i messed up the tabs though was doing it on iPhone so will redo on laptop!
I'm totally  dyslexic but I get there.
I've reworded my profile and it's on going I thought of perhaps giving each 3 services there own tab ? 
Trying to keep it short. 

But yes work in progress!